A man is putting a lot of work into what looks like music production. His back is facing the camera and over his shoulder we can see intricate recording software and tools. | This shows that the man is very into his work. Its not just a hobby but something larger. |
Alarm clock sounds for 4:30 am. Man shut off clock and continues to work as the shot fades to black | This scene reveals his dedication which reinforces his hard work ethic. |
It is now bright out/the morning and we see the man asleep on the desk with all the production tools still out. Narration cuts in. “Looks pretty pathetic if you ask me. That man you’re looking at, that was me 5 months ago” | This scene introduces the character and shows us that this is a personal story told from a reflective viewpoint. |
The main character gets up, looking groggy, and checks his watch. His clothes are dirty and he looks like a wreck. The narrator explains his dream of becoming a musical artist. | This scene introduces the characters dreams/goals. It gives us a better insight on the main character and it shows us that he is not living a comfortable life |
After the narration, the main character picks up his phone and sees that he has 5 missed calls. He dials the number and talks to what sounds like his boss. He tells his boss he’s sorry he's late and that he got “caught up” and will be at the office soon | This scene adds further complication to the main characters life and shows us that he’s facing many challenges. |
Narration: “Work was a drag like always... but I was almost done. My first single would soon be released and my dreams would come true” The main character gets back and finishes his single | This rising action makes us happy for the protagonist and we rejoice with what sounds like great news. Things sound like they are piecing together. |
Narration: “Or thats what I thought...” He posts his first single and it gets nowhere. He gets a handful of views on the single and thats it. “Fame seemed so close, yet it was so far. The single would stay unknown for another six weeks” | This was quick burst of hope which looked like a resolution to the problem. However, we learn nothing changes and his life still goes on. “Another six weeks” foreshadows the future and what will happen. |
“Thats when I got the message...” We see a shot that shows *1 New Message* on his email from a mysterious source. “Thats when things changed” | More foreshadowing leading to rising action. We wonder what might happen and we may start to make predictions. |
The main character gets out of his car in front of an old sketchy looking building while the narration explains that he got an email from a strange company telling him to come there if he “wanted his dreams to become a reality”. He talks on the phone reassuring someone that it'll be fine and that he's safe. | This scene shows us another glimpse of hope. However, this is a strange one. The music gives a sense of uneasiness and the reassurance on the phone shows us that the main character feels unsure as well. It is unknown as to what is inside and what will happen. |
He opens the door. Its extremely dim and vision is limited inside. He can faintly see a table and someone sitting at the other end of it. He says “Hello?” and hears a voice calmly say “Yes. come in” | This brings an extreme feeling of the unknown. We don't know who is the man on the other side of the table or what else may be in the room. |
The mysterious man asks “So you want the fame, the fortune?”. The main character replies “Yes.” and the man replies “I can give it all to you... But there is a price” | This is rising action. We learn that the man isn't an ordinary person. He may know higher ups, he may have connections, or something else, completely unknown. |
The man explains “The music industry isn't just a game. Fame doesn't just happen on its own. Everything has a reason” The main character asks “W-Who are you?” The man chuckles. “I go by many names, but that is not important now” | We learn a deeper truth in this scene. Part of the unknown is revealed to the character and audience, however we are still missing important pieces. Who is that man and what is he hiding? |
The man slides a piece of paper into the main characters vision and a pen along with it. He proclaims “Would you trade your life for but a moment’s pleasure?” The main character is silent “Are you willing to trade your soul for earthly fame?” | A giant twist is presented to the character and the audience. We learn that this is no normal man. The character is facing his biggest challenge/choice yet. He must decide what he really wants and what his dreams are really worth. |
The man explains that with this contract he will be granted all the worldly desires he could ask for but in return when his death comes he will forever be a slave in the afterlife. The character picks up the pen and thinks for a moment, unsure of his choice. The shot fades to black and we hear a pen click | We learn the true nature of this deal and what's really behind it. The man (most likely the devil) truly tests the character and he must decide what he really wants. With the cut to black, we are left in suspense and are unsure as to what his decision entailed. |
Black background: “That was the toughest choice of my life” The shot opens of the main character getting dressed and buttoning up his shirt. He starts putting on a tie. “I don’t know how I came to my choice... but I know I made the right one” Music starts and the character is getting ready to leave. Before he leaves, we cut to a shot of him reaching for his wallet. A wallet packed with cash. | This scene can be taken as the aftermath of the climax or even somewhat of a resolution. We are still unsure of his choice and have no idea what he has done. There are no major clues. Only one... |
Wednesday, October 10, 2012
Fame: Step Outline
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I love this film and i think it would be very interesting and suspence ful but i have a questions: How would you show that the man failing at the music industry?
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